no one seems to be buying any of Jan's excuses and i think it's just now dawning on her that she's been talking WAY too much


Moderator: overbarrel49
Wow! I certainly do enjoy your new pic!overbarrel49 wrote:Hannah seems to be having a good time though...............what goes around, comes around i guess. i hope you enjoy the new pic. phil
hi Boom,hugob00m wrote:Wow! I certainly do enjoy your new pic!![]()
This story is quickly becoming my favorite
i think you're right. of course, Jan already had her fun while Hannah was getting ithugob00m wrote:Hannah's does indeed seem to be having a good time... even though she just finished getting her own backside thoroughly tanned! It must be because she's finally seeing justice done to her little slster! And Isaac is certainly enjoying himself! Gary must be liking the view from where he's standing. Hmmm... I think maybe the only one who's not having a good time is Janice!
hi Willjohn,willjohn wrote:If Hannah keeps up the chuckling is she risking another trip over hubby's knee?
hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:First, Phil, know that I am totally "sold" on the pictures you provide, so have no fear that I would abandon you as a fan.
this is a very interesting story! i have had several viewers suggest that they would like to see a story such as the scenario you described above. it seems like there are quite a few folks who fantasize about this but you are the only one i know of that has actually had it happendaneldorado wrote:What I want to tell you now is this: Back in my youth, my pal Richard and I dated two girls who were "best friends." We spanked our ladies regularly, but one night we decided to "mix it up" a little. So I spanked my girl Patti, and Richard spanked his Ginny. THEN, to sweeten the experience, we decided to switch girls.
So that evening, I gave Patti her regular spanking and Richard spanked Ginny... BUT THEN, we switched off, and each of us guys put the OTHER GUY''S girl over his knee. So that night I spanked my sweet Patti, then followed up by spanking Ginny while Richard spanked my girl.
That was the most orgasmic experience I had ever had, to that point. And now I am wondering if the thought of switching ladies for a second spanking, has ever occurred to you... a "double" spanking, as it were.
Cheers,
hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:And again, we get a great Leg Show from Janice... although, to be fair, we must admit that this time her left leg is identical to the left leg in the previous panel. But I love the sight of pretty legs anyway, so a repeat view is not too tough to take.![]()
i actually started doing this at your suggestion. it's a more difficult pic for me to do since it's a problem making it look as if her bottom cheek has been flattened out by the swat landing so i had been kind of avoiding such pics until you mentioned it some time back. i think i am getting better at depicting his hand landing, although there's still room for improvement, but i do have to agree with you that it adds to the over all effect. i was particularly pleased with pic #010 in this toon and i thought showing his hand landing made this pic more intense than it might have been otherwisedaneldorado wrote:And I like that you are once again showing us a panel with Isaac's hand connecting with its delectable target, rather than just waving it in the air. Of course I love all the stages of a good M/F spanking scene, but sadly a lot of spanko artists only draw the hand in the air, rather than hitting the target. Here, we see ALL stages of the "action" taking place.
i like that "provocative" language and i think such language adds some extra fun to the storydaneldorado wrote:Meanwhile, the already-spanked Hannah is having a great time watching her sister get her smacks. She is now using some pretty provocative language, for example "your dress is sliding up and your tiny panties are crawling right into your crack... HaHaHaHaaa!" Previously, she had commented on Jan's "barely there" panties and how revealing they are. Hannah's "mouthing off" like that shows us what a brat she really is, even though she is still nursing a very sore bottom herself.![]()
as many times as you have mentioned "One Good Turn", your comment about "Back to Basics" is an unexpected one but one that brought a smile to my facedaneldorado wrote:Phil, this is a scrumptious feast for the eyes. "Back to Basics" is now in danger of topping what I consider your previous best work, that being "One Good Turn." It was so joyous to see both mother and daughter being spanked, back to back... and now we are seeing two sisters being spanked in a similar way. Phil, you are too good for us... and I hope you never stop.
Cheers,
Dan
hi web-ed,web-ed wrote:We're making some progress here as Janice is beginning to promise to be a good girl instead of making demands. The roles have certainly been reversed between the sisters now as it's Hannah who's laughing at Jan's predicament instead of the other way around. And I'm certainly happy with the condition of Jan's bottom, although Jan may not be!
i'm glad you're enjoying this toonweb-ed wrote:I'm in agreement with Dan's assessment of this series as a whole. Too tired now in the middle of the night to be more specific, but good work!
hi Dan,daneldorado wrote:Wow...Isaac has rediscovered the proper format for Janice, all right! In your latest panel, her bottom looks redder than ever, and I have this feeling that when Isaac finishes with her, that bottom is going to be as red as a beet. All in the interest of getting her attention, of course.
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that embarrassment is part of her punishment of course although i have to wonder at this point just how much she is still aware of the onlookers............i think Isaac is giving her "other" things to think aboutdaneldorado wrote:Phil, your newest pic is fabulous as always. I love the positioning and I am loving the fact that Jan's spanking has witnesses. Oh man, that's GOT to make this whole ordeal even more painful. Just think of the embarrassment she must be suffering right now!
the whole left arm looked too long to me when i went back and had another look at the pic..........and you're right, i remember web-ed did mentioning this one time before. i really don't understand what causes this since the bodies are set and have the same proportions in every pic. you mentioned a problem with one of her feet a while back too. it apparently has to do with the cameras and the angles at which they are used. i guess the only thing can do to avoid this is to pay better attention when i am rendering the pics and to make changes to get rid of any problems.daneldorado wrote:As I say, I love the positioning in this panel, but I did notice that, once again, you have made her left arm TOO LONG. Actually, it's her upper arm. The left forearm looks just about right, but the biceps/triceps part of her arm looks about twice as long as it should. I know, I know: It's a tricky position to get right. If memory serves, one of our members -- maybe the bossman himself, Web-ed -- wrote a comment to you about this very problem in a pic you posted for your gem, "One Good Turn."
i'm glad you enjoyed the pic anyway............and the glowing bottomdaneldorado wrote:Please understand Phil, I think your artistry is just fine, and in fact it is just about PERFECT! If the spankee's left arm seems too long in a pic, at least the main attraction (her glowing red butt) is depicted authentically. And that's worth the price of admission, right there.
Keep the Faith, okay?
Cheers,
Dan
hi web-ed,web-ed wrote:I think Isaac has finally gotten the message through to Jan! I think what I like best about this panel i the way Jan's arms and legs are waving wildly about, unable to diminish the stinging sensation in her backside!
she does seem to be having a reaction to watching........perhaps some different sensations than she felt when she was getting her spankingweb-ed wrote: I also think that Hannah may be up to something - she seems to find her sister's helplessness way too tempting.Good job on this latest installment.